百师联盟 2024届高三二轮复习联考(一)1 新高考卷Ⅱ英语试题正在持续更新，本期2024衡中同卷单元卷答案网为大家整理了相关试题及答案，供大家查缺补漏，高效提升成绩。 几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。未能达到预期的写作目的。第一档(1一3分)一遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。完全未达到预期的写作目的。零分未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。第二节：参考范文：To attract more attention,the students divided their work into various roles.Joy tookcharge of organizing the lemonade stand.She wore a T-shirt with the club's logo andapproached passers-by with enthusiasm.Meanwhile,other Squash members were in charge ofcreating eye-catching posters and signs about the spotted lanternfly invasion.Theystrategically placed these materials around the park to educate people about the environmentalthreat and the importance of supporting their cause.The team also offered educational gamesand quizzes,encouraging participants to learn more about the impact of invasive species onlocal ecosystems.As the day progressed,the students'efforts paid off.Gradually,more and more parkgoers came up to their table,eager to support the cause.Their lemonade and cookies quicklysold out in no time.What's more,donations poured in,surpassing their initial goal of 200.Joy and her fellow students were overwhelmed by the support and generosity from thestrangers.They felt a sense of accomplishment,realizing that their small action had sparked aripple effect.The funds raised would enable them to purchase milkweed and the traps,expanding their efforts to protect not only their school courtyard but also other vulnerableareas in the city.一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1)创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：【高二英语·参考答案第9页（共10页）】·24-373B·